Friday, 22 March 2019

Camp Kaitawa

This is my reflections from Camp Kaitawa.
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  1. Anonymous22 May 2019 at 12:22

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    1. Anonymous22 May 2019 at 12:24

      Thanks for a comment Ruby

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  2. Anonymous23 May 2019 at 11:14

    Kia Ora Avie,
    I really like your Camp Slides.I like how you added in lots of nice Photos that goes with your writing to explain what happened.Your blog brings me back to Camp and how fun it was.What was your favorite part of Camp? For nexts time reread your writing and add in more information.Other then that I really liked your blog post

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  3. Anonymous23 May 2019 at 12:10

    Hi Avie, I really enjoyed your post about Camp Kaitawa. I liked how you included extra information about kayaking and your chores. Maybe next time you could check over to make sure you have punctuation in all the right places. From Nellie.

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  4. Anonymous23 May 2019 at 13:06

    Hi Avie

    Your blog post is amazing. Next time you should add full stops and capitals letters. What was your fav moment?

    Thanks Ruby

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